Surfers, tadpole-black and slick
slide easily towards land on freezing sea –
free as fish, they tumble in the waves -
while I slip and stumble on the icy path,
tentative like the silver light tracing
the fields, frilling the scallop-edged waves.
Swanpool, 7th January 2010
2 comments:
What a juxtaposition, Victoria!! Well done! Ahhh, we have no open waters here, so I'm thinking our tadpoles are hibernating now. And I am too, so no juxtaposition for me. I'm so enjoying our poetography!!
Oh Victoria...how wonderful to live beside the sea ! Daisy asked yesterday could we go to the beach :0)
I LOVE your words and yoru pictures , truly I do xx
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